Hey Brooke!I really liked your introduction and your overall Harry Potter Theme. Harry Potter was a huge part of my childhood, so you are helping bring back great memories of that. With that being said I cannot wait to read your stories. Your introduction has already got me enchanted with all the different possibilities that could possibly come from your mind. I think these kinds of stories will resonate with people in this class a lot better. Not only that but I think that since Harry Potter is so big that it will capture everyone’s attention and they will be enthralled with the stories. I also liked how you let us know what kind of stories we could expect but I do kind of wish we got to know what we were going to be reading next. I only say that because I am really looking forward to your finished story book. I will definitely be back to check it out after you have posted some stories.
Hi Brooke,I enjoyed the dark and gloomy theme to your shop! I bet it will produce really cool and interesting stories to read later. I am gonna have to bookmark this so I can come back later to read. I enjoy the parallels to the Harry Potter stories here. The different artifacts are gonna have their own stories behind them I bet! Instead of being cheerful, I think these stories are gonna stick to people easier as the tone of them will resonate within the reader. These kinds of stories always suck me in, and I have to finish them to see what happens. I cannot wait for you to publish some more stories so I can know what happens at the shop! I wonder what kinds of adventures each artifact can take us on. Just like how the celestial items in the Ramayana have a story of their own! Great work!